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Post by Retinouto on Jun 3, 2008 18:17:11 GMT 2
That's one of my quickly-written poems. ;D [glow=red,2,300]Wishing[/glow] Wishing,wishing is all I can do, Dreaming,dreaming.It's one of my habits too!
Digging,digging to find anything to survive. I can jump,skip,hop,swim and dive! Searching,searching for a lost treasure, Trying to find something just for my leisure!
Wishing,wishing is all I can do, Dreaming,dreaming.It's one of my habits too!
Surviving,surviving.Trying to keep alive, Searching again.I've found my bee hive! Itch,itch,my hand goes, Stare,stare.The wind blows!
Wishing,wishing is all I can do, Dreaming,dreaming.It's one of my habits too!
I've wished to live for just one peaceful day, but the devil arrived and the peace flew away! I've dreamt to be an engineer, Unfortunately,I could find no one to give me a cheer!
Wishing,wishing is all I can do, Dreaming,dreaming.It's one of my habits too!So,what do you think of that?
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Yousr
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Post by Yousr on Jun 19, 2008 21:49:33 GMT 2
Oh Reemo!! What a master piece of writing have you written!! May God shower you with his blessings...Good Luck multi-talented Reemo
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Post by Miss Nourhan on Jun 19, 2008 21:58:55 GMT 2
I helped her to write that too! ...haha
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Post by Retinouto on Jun 29, 2008 22:50:18 GMT 2
oh thank you soo much Yousr!! and..Nour...you just helped me in typing the poem and in the punctuation!!!
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Post by Miss Nourhan on Jun 30, 2008 0:07:19 GMT 2
And I also helped you with the words,rememeber?
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Yousr
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Post by Yousr on Jul 9, 2008 14:25:45 GMT 2
God Bless you both
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